Thursday, 27 October 2016

Top 20 Creepypasta stories

Warning: The following countdown contains disturbing, violent, scary and shocking contents. Readers discretion advised.


Hey everyone, my name is Anthony and welcome back to my countdown with Halloween special.

So for this countdown, i felt like to do one of the most famous meme around the internet called "Creepypasta".

Creepypasta is a fictional horror stories around the internet to making something darker and darker. These including fictional, characters, lost episodes, video games and more of them.

From a game from a dead boy to a psychopathic killer, im counting 20 of my fav Creepypasta stories. Now, this list is always my personal pick that i like, if some of your fav Creepypasta isn't on my list, let me know at the comments bellow.

So, lets get spooky, shall we?

Number 20: Sonic.EXE

Now im pretty sure lot of Sonic fans will be mad for my pick on lower list, but i like this story, but im not a huge fan of Sonic anymore. Im sorry.

Anyway, this story tells about a man name Tom found a disc from his friend name Kyle, which the message tells him to destroy the disc, because of Sonic is plain evil and faster than him.

But Tom doesn't know if it was true, instead, he decides to play it. Once he goes to the menu, he notices that in split second, it went horrifying with blood bath and he can't play as Sonic, he only play as Tails, Knuckle and Dr. Robotnik.

He starts to play as Tails, it start nice and quiet, but everything change that its dark and sonic chasing at Tails and murder him that he plays as Knuckle, but got killed to play one more character, that is Dr. Robotnik, but also killed.

Which result that the game got stuck with Sonic claims that he's the god and Tom was in the huge risk that he could've destroy it, but he's completely doomed from the evil hedgehog.

Despite that, it has a game adaptation from the Creepypasta, although it was kinda loosely from the fiction where its only in the first act from the story.

If you wanna play, try it, for your own risk...

Number 19: Jane the killer

The story tells about a girl originally to be name  Jane Arkensaw, but known as "Jane the killer".

It tells her origin where she met Jeff the killer, from before, she met Jeff and his brother Liu, but not before they got attacked by the bullies as she was panicked to telling them to stop. But Jeff and his brother fought back, but his brother took the blame for the attack.

But when she was on the party to looking at Jeff , the gang of bullies came back to attacking Jeff again, as she tries to call 911 for the cops. but it has gun shooting out of nowhere and at one point that the house was on fire by the bullies as she managed to survive from the incident.

But several times later, she was wearing her long nightgown but noticed that her parents was disappeared. While she's alone, she heard some tapping noise, it was Jeff, he's now widely eyes open and smiling, he's targeting at Jane for a fight to the death, she tried to call the police, but the phone was disconnected, she had no choice but to fight him for her own life...

However, she was being captured by Jeff, he teases her for beautiful look. But not before he watering a gasoline at her face and set her on fire. After that, she was taken to the hospital, she was traumatized from Jeff from her own face of a fire. Once she gets up, she received a gift box, with white mask, a wig and her dress. and finally a message that Jeff made an apology for the incident.

Once she wears them and leave the hospital, she notices two gravestones, it was her dead parents, which she believes that it was Jeff who killed them, so she seeks revenge to kill him once and for all...

Although i have to admit, it was pretty interesting of this side-story. Even though Jane might be beautiful, but im pretty sure she's not gonna be a murderer in this horror sub-story...

Number 18: Molly the dolly

This story tells about tells about a girl name Alicia who lives with her young sister Abby and her mother to a new home. When they go the store, Alicia sees a doll called "Molly the dolly", when she looks at it, she finds it creepy, her mother finds it beautiful and her sister finds it funny, so her mother purchased it.

Molly the dolly describe her as she wears her orange-pinkish dress and black eyes. Once her mother bought it, she placed on the mental piece.

But in one night when Alicia was sleeping, she hears a childish girl voice, it was Molly, who's coming to attack Alicia, she tried to call her sister, but nothing happen. But molly keeps singing to coming towards her room. Alicia tries to call her mom to make it stop to her sister, but again, nothing happen.

She was feared from the voice, but the door opened, as Molly is managing to kill her.

But one mourning, her mother awakes to find her daughter Alicia, but she was disappeared. But not before Molly is back in the mental piece, along with another doll that looks like Alicia...

I find the story itself was rather above average, its mostly short, but i find it pretty creepy when a young girl hears about a doll comes to life and kills her.

Number 17: Ed Edd and Eddy: The lost episode

This lost episode was accidentally aired between October 7th and 21th 2003, it was supposed to be a  34th episode, but never happen, due to the fact that it has a bad quality like screen up and down like any VHS tape and some characters are completely different than the show itself.

It all begins where Ed and Eddy walking doing the street, but without Edd (aka Double-D), Eddy was angry with iris in red and Ed was crying to tell something bad happening, meanwhile, Edd was sleeping in his room in claymation.

But the scene were changed to Jimmy and Sarah in a doctor meeting in dentist. The face of the doctor was never shown, Sarah was escorted and Jimmy was in torture. But it was stopped to a commercial.

But the show goes back, it shows Rolf in hairy who's beating up at the cow with his fists in blurry.

Then it changed to Nazz reading a magazine, but Eddy is all alone without Ed, and walking back to his home in happy mood.

But not before Johnny comes out of Nazz's couch in comedic, but the comedic was short, as he eats her head and she ends up limping.

And at the end, Edd was laying on the ground and not in claymation.

This is one the lost episode that i find it pretty weird and disturbing. Even though ed Edd and Eddy is one weird show in Cartoon Network. No wonder the show was popular in early millennium.

Number 16: White with Red (aka Keyhole)

This story tells about a man walks in the hotel and received a key on his desk from a woman for his own room.

However, she also tells him that there's a door without number of hotel that he'll not allow to check. Little did he know, he was curious about this room. At next day, he decides to look through a keyhole, when he checked, it was girl in empty room, standing in the corner. He tries to knock, but he can't.

At third day, he checks the same room, but this time, everything is all bloody red. He was nervous that it was blocked or something

He decides to going to the desk with a same woman, she asked him if she look through a keyhole, which he did. As a result, she tells the story about the man who murdered his wife from a long time ago, which cause this room with a deceased wife in ghost with pale skin and bloody red.

Although the story was short, but i find it pretty creepy when you wanna looking through a keyhole something creepy or other, it gets disturbing like this story.

Number 15: The Ronald McDonald house

McDonald is a big restaurant company that we all know and love. Ever since every kids love to going in there. The company introduced "The Ronald McDonald house", which is a charity to raise money for the families with kids in health problem.

But there's another one, but unlike many of charities, this one is unlikely, it has an unknown apartment and no address.

This so called "charity" is a torture house for murdering families and kids in the dark room with a killer disguising as Ronald McDonald.

Especially that the killer is also known to bring every chunks of human flesh for the ingredient from McDonald.

However, it is one dangerous place that there's no escape, making it impossible to get away from the killer.

For me, i find that the story is interesting and pretty gruesome  idea for torturing for McDonald's meal. Its like you bring chicken in torture, but with human's fleshes...

Number 14: Annora Petrova

This story tells about Annora herself who's an ice-skating figure who's the most promising figuring in competition.

However, things are going down from hill, that she has an awful look on her face and noticing a Wikipedia page about herself.

She to making her account and putting an upgrade about herself that she won the Olympic. but it didn't work, when someone edit it by saying "Annora Petrova is a selfish little bitch who is going to get what she deserves.", which resulting her into a meltdown.

She tried to be nice to her coach, but he refuses that drops her and the page was edited that it said that she died in 2010.

It was unknown who's behind the page to bullying at her for banning and and a prediction of death and at the end, she locked herself in her room for her life and waiting for the update for a Wikipedia page...

This is one of the fictional story with a skating figure in a kinda cyberbully on the wiki. Although it was dark, but it has an element of depression about her in a meltdown...

Number 13: SuicideMouse.AVI



This lost episode was made somewhere in the 1930's.

It begins where Mickey Mouse walking down the street in loop with sad attitude with a bad quality sound of a piano.

But after few minutes, the piano changed into a static noise and abruptly in black for more minutes.

Then it goes back to the same walking scene, but the with a woman screaming in the background, Mickey starts having a weird look in his face, the background starting with distortion and it nearly shows a human face in the background in disturbing and saying "Real suffer is not known". But not before he shoots himself after saying it seven times.

And it ends with Mickey Mouse's face with a broken down quality music in the background.

I find that the video itself is pretty disturbing and it fit well from the original. You watch it if you want, with your own risk...

Number 12: Mr. Widemouth

Mr. Widemouth is a little furry creature with his wide grin, who wants to teaching kids in a torture way.

The story begins where a boy has moved somewhere in Pennsylvania, but not before he meets Mr. Widemouth himself out of nowhere. at first, he was curious about him that he's like a Furby, despite Widemouth never heard of it.

They're go on for a conversation with playing game without parents, but thing start to get darker about Mr. Widemouth, he said that he taught every kids to play a game, especially one where he told one that if the kid look down for a trampoline, jumping out and bouncing like a feather or even teaching how to do a juggling.

It turns out these games are playing suicide by jumping out of window and splattering on ground and playing juggling with knives.

Several years later, the boy was grown to adult and return of his previous home New Vineyard, Maine. He felt that Mr. Widemouth is disappeared. Once he walk to a cemetery, he sees every gravestones from all the dead children from Mr. Widemouth...

Though i gotta say, it was pretty dark and creepy about Mr. Widemouth himself to play a deadly game. He always want to have fun...   For death...

Number 11: Squidward Suicide

Yet another lost episode, a worker of Nickelodeon had a dark story involving a project episode of Spongebob Squarepants in 2005. He though that he found a copy of "Fear of a Krabby Patty", but it was unlikely...

It begins where Squidward was practicing of his clarinet concert. But then Spongebob came in to have fun, but Squidward refuses that he was busy on his own in a comedic, but the comedy was only in the beginning.

Later that night, he's in the concert with his performance, one he was ended, thing started to get darker and darker, the crown, along with Spongebob and his friend Patrick have a hyper realistic eyes in red and booing at Squidward, causing him feel very upset for his performance, since he was doing good.

At next scene, he was crying in he bed room and he also have hyper realistic eyes. The camrea zooms at him in sadness. But the scene have a split seconds with two kids get killed in mangle and bloody, one with a boy and the other one with a girl.

At the end, his eyes is bleeding in depression, he heard a voice in his mind simply tells him "Do It...!", where he grabs his shotgun and shoots himself of his head...

This one is easily considered to be known of a lost episode of Creepypasta, but for me, im not a huge fan of Spongebob, since the show in current is just rather boring and...  yeah...

Number 10: Gateway to the mind
Drawn by me (Blackevil915)

The story takes place in 1983, the team of scientist have a dark business, they're conducting radical experiment in an undisclosed facility. They theorized that the humanity had no accessing any sense to perceiving of stimuli which is able to perceiving the presence of God. They believe that there five senses clouded for the awareness of eternity, it not, they'll  contacting the God.


The test was on to the elder man as a subject for a volunteer. When they're doing an operation for his sensory nerve of his brain, which it was surgically severed. However, the man has no vision, no hearing, no tasting, no smelling nor feeling. Which it will be impossible to communicating with or even sensing the world.

After four days, the man said that he hears a voice on his mind, the scientist give him an attention for the concerns. Two days later, he was crying, due to the fact that he heard about his deceased wife, they're not convinced about, but he named dead relatives of them.

But after a week, thing start to get worse, that he's starting feel distress to hearing hundreds of voice that he starts hurt himself to get away from them. The scientists helped him to escape the voices by sleeping. It works, but it only does it for three days, despite that he heard and saw his dead wife.

But one his three days of sleeping is expired, he'started to going insane about a physical world, he was going to hurt himself by clawing his face and biting his own flesh from hell of his mind.

In the end, after two weeks, he was rehydrated from his meltdown. He looked at the scientist, despite of his blindness and said his final words "I have spoken with God, and He has abandoned us", then his vital stopped and he passed away.

I mean good lord, it was like a nightmare from the voices in the brain that causing insane of suicide, talk about a dark suicide story. Even though the man is almost like trying to kill himself, but they tried to stop and help him out, but it was too late for him...

Number 9: Cupcakes
Drawn by  xXDark-AngelX

Now this one is not only a Creepypasta story, but its also a fan-fiction, a rather, dark, fan-fiction...

Its no common to have a dark fan-fiction of My Little Pony, since i am a brony of the show, i like the characters, some episodes and i kinda like the spin-off movies like Equestria Girls. This one is common of the dark fan-fiction, along with "Rainbow Factory". Although i like it, but "Cupcakes" is the bloody icing in the cake that i find it pretty dark and gory...

Written by Sergeant Sprinkles, it begins where Rainbow Dash doing her own routine, clearing clouds and trained herself for her skills. But then, Pinkie Pie comes in to see Rainbow Dash to hang out. She asks her if she can join together for making cupcakes.

Pinkie gibes Dash a free cupcakes to take a bite, but she's passed out, Pinkie Pie drags her to the dark room. Once Dash opens her eyes, the room has heads of ponies and even her friend Gilda. Pinkie appears wearing a clothe made of pony skins, which apparently, she secretly murdered them for a special ingredient for cupcakes.

And then, she starts picking knives and saw to slicing Dash's skin, her cutie mark and even decapitating her wings. And finally, Pinkie cuts open Dash's gut to removing every organs and even tearing her heart out, killing her so bad...

This is one of the fan-fiction is dark for the readers and Bronies, with fears, sadness and probably having a nightmare about it. I mean, after i read it, i had a nightmare that i am Pinkie's victim that im also get tortured for of course, another ingredient for cupcakes. Lets hope it doesn't taste like chocolate anymore, it will be absolutely disgusting...


Number 8: Abandoned by Disney

There a plenty of abandoned areas that has been documented from the past, whether from abandoned city from Ukraine or even abandoned theme park...

However, there's another abandoned park, that was pretty unknown that nobody has ever going there...

The place was called "Mowgli's palace" that was located in Bahamas. So a writer decides to going in this abandoned place to see it. It starts out normal, with growing plants all over the place, since it was old that was made in the 1990's.

But when he gets in, thing starts to get worse, the place is completely dark and disaster, there plenty of meat chains, plenty of written messages of "Abandoned by Disney" on the walls in black and some noise out of nowhere...

When he moves to a room of "Mascot only",  he explores to see some costumes, he goes to a room of "Character Prep-1", he sees plenty of Disney characters, but one is pretty different, it has a Mickey Mouse costume in photo negative color.

When he was about to leave, the unthinkable happen, the costume comes to alive, standing in front of a him and asked him with "Hey, wanna see my head come off?". With no response, it pulls out of its head and the neck is bursting out with a yellow chunky blood...

He screams of it and runs away to leave the palace, but not before a last message on the wall that says "Abandoned by God", then finally left...   And he'll never see this place ever again...

Wow, i find it pretty scary of this cursed abandoned place, its as if a negative color of Mickey Mouse likes to see another visitor for more bloody mess out of its neck...

Number 7: Slenderman

Ah yes, who could forget the one that started the legend in Creepypasta's folklore.

Slenderman was first introduced in "Something Awful" page by Eric Knudsen in June 10th 2009 with a black and white pictures in the background that we can see him that started all.

Slenderman appears to be a tall and skinny, wearing a black suit, his skin is white and he's faceless.

He can hide somewhere in the dark areas, the most common is in the forest. He has camouflage ability, because of resembling a tree (kinda), he has strength and teleportation. The dangerous fact about him, is that when he comes at you, you'll hear a static noise and if you look at his face, he'll come at you and easily kill you.

But what it makes this even more scary, is that he also has tentacles on his back to easily capturing you.

This creature will cause memory loss, insomnia, paranoia, coughing fits and video distortion... 

In fact, he was so famous that he made a lot of fan-made movies and even two video games, like Slender: the eight pages.

If you guys want to play this game, its free, but be careful, it was hard and scary when Slenderman will always following you around in the dark forest...

Number 6: Username666



This video shows what happen if you search the web address of  Youtube.com with "666".

At first, it doesn't work, until it refreshing the page non-stop. But not before the website start to get worse with the background change into a hellish red and it shows a channel simply name "666".

Then it shows a video of its channel, but the site is stuck that there's now way to turn off the internet nor even turning off a computer, which means that the computer is cursed that the figure from "666" comes out of video and crashing the computer.

The video became viral and it has over 9,2 million views after eight years since it became a Creepypasta story and rumors. The most notable rumor is that the Youtube channel "666" contains virus to destroying computer, laptop and other system when anyone searching it for a huge risk...

When i saw it, this really scare me that i don't want to know about this fictional channel. Like, i had a nightmare where my home computer was curse with blood comes out of my screen and when i open the screen, a female figure from the video comes out and killed me so bad. So if you wanna watch this video at night, sweet dreams...

Number 5: The Rake

The Rake is a humanoid creature, appears in white skin, skinny and has claws on his hands. This creature lurks around the woods and talking people for killing, similar to Slenderman.

The creature was first discovered in 2003 on northeastern United States. The rake will following people in the wood whenever it was daytime or nighttime.

Especially with one story in 2006 where the family had an incident with the creature itself crawls towards a husband and then attacking a daughter and she claimed that "he is the Rake" and died from the attack...

This creature was also became popular to have numerous media appearance, especially on Youtube and even an indie game.

Though i gotta say, this creature looks pretty cool and rather creepy with a look on its face, and its always not only annoying, but also very frightening that it will finds you...   And it will kill you...

Number 4: SmileDog.Jpeg

It tells about a man goes to a woman name Mary E for a story when they met each other in 2007. 

However at one day, she was feared and locked herself in her chamber. She rants that she had a nightmare in her vision and her mind from the image. But not before she committed suicide when he goes back to her home after a week.

Since she died, he founds a floppy disc that says "Smile.JPEG", once he bring it and insert it to a computer, he sees this image with a dog in a nightmarish grin in the dark background. After looking at it, he starts having a nightmare from this image.

But after the nightmare he receives an Email that simply called "Smile", which it has a frightening warning message, claiming that he has to share it to his friends. But if he can't sharing it, he's ended up having even worse nightmare that the image changes into a demonic Smile Dog.

This image is more likely a warning sign for "Spreading the word" to save yourself from Smile Dog, because if you don't, some say that this dog, will turning into a demonic dog for a dark insane nightmare...

If you ever see this demonic dog, send it to your friends or no one, cause if not, he will be with you for a horrible nightmare...

Number 3: Russian Sleep Experiment

This story takes place in late 1940's after WWII, the researchers brought five people as the subjects to the chamber, they kept them for fifteen days with the experimental gas.

It started all normal, but the subjects are complaining that they don't want to live in the chamber for a days, despite the chamber has books, a cots for sleeping, some toilets and some dried foods. After five days, their arguments started to get too much for the circumstances and events, which causing a paranoia. And they began to whispering at the security microphone.

But not before the experiment is going down, where a subject is going insane by killing the other subject by eating it alive with scratching and torn off muscles as his meal. The researchers went to the chamber to stop the incident and bring the subject for the test, but it was too late that causes a lot of murdering, which the subject grabbed a gun and killed the researchers.

He pointed at the last researcher, he asked him to know about the subject's problem of insanity, the subject responded "Have you forgotten so easily? We are you. We are the madness that lurks within you all, begging to be free at every moment in your deepest animal mind. We are what you hide from in your beds every night. We are what you sedate into silence and paralysis when you go to the nocturnal haven where we cannot tread."

And he shot the final researcher on his heart and ended with three words "So... Nearly... Free..."

This one is easily the most famous and the most gruesome fiction story ever written, since the subjects doesn't like to be in the experimental gas, which cause one going insane of killing. But it remains unknown for the final subject if he's out there to kill others or find his home for his freedom at the end of the incident of experiment...

Number 2: Jeff the killer

Jeff is one of the Creepypasta character that also became famous, but this guy is probably my fav.

But, where did he began?

It all begins where Jeff and his family was packed to their new home. Jeff and his brother Liu has nothing problem for their new home. His mother said that they're about to inviting for a birthday party.

One day, Jeff and his brother are about to going to school, they're waiting for the bus, but they meet three teenagers, which resulting to a brutal fight, with Jeff bursting in anger to attack those teenagers with a knife. But the attack was ended it up with a blame by Liu with his juvenile attention.

At one day, it was a day with birthday party. The family was exciting for a fun time, but Jeff isn't. But he did join in by playing with little kids. But the game was interrupted by three bully teenagers, which resulting a fight in the party. But Jeff ended up got a bottle smash by one of teenager with a vodka bottle, leaving his face in wet of alcohol. But Jeff gets his revenge by brutally kill him, But not before he was being beaten by two teenagers, one of then bring a lighter and throw to a house to set him on fire.

After an incident, he was taken to the hospital with bandages covering his face from a fire. When the doctor takes off the bandages of Jeff's face to reveal him, his parents were afraid and felt sorry for him. But Jeff is starting to going insane, his brother Liu felt that Jeff is going crazy when they come back home.

But one night, his mother woke up from the sound in the bathroom, it was Jeff, he cuts his eyelids that he'll never sleeps and cuts his cheek open for his bloody smile. When he was done, he shows his face at his her, but she was horrified from him, she ran to her husband to bring a gun, but Jeff followed her to kill them.

In the end, he was going to his brother's room, Liu wakes up and got covered his mouth, until Jeff allegedly kills him with his phrase "Shhhh.... Go, to sleep"...

Yeah, its no wonder how Jeff became popular with his tragic backstory that he turned into an insane murderer. He's like The Joker from Batman, but more darker and more bloody. In fact, he was so popular that has plenty of spin-off appearance in fan-fiction, specially with "Jane the killer"...


And now, my number one of my favorite Creepypasta story was...





Number 1: SCP Foundation

Out of  all of Creepypasta's fictional stories ever told, this one is easily one of my favorite.

SCP Foundation (aka Special Containment Procedures) is a fictional organization that involves with entities with objects, locations and creatures that violate natural law, these are known as "SCPs".

This company has doctors, scientists, agents and prisoners for the work of analyzing at any SCPs. Each SCPs has three classes

Safe: means "assigned to subjects or objects that may be effectively and reliably contained.". In other words, most of them are either harmless and giving something nice for the humanity.

Euclid: means "when its behavior cannot be unerringly predicted, either because the item is sentient, it behaves outside of current scientific knowledge, or its nature is simply poorly understood at present.". In other words, most of them have some flaws, some that are good, but cause some risk for prediction and harming.

Keter: mean "is assigned to subjects that both (a) display vigorous, active hostility to human life, civilization, and/or spacetime, and (b) are capable of causing significant destruction in the event of a containment breach.". In other words, some of them will cause dangerous to humanity or even causing the end of the world.

There are plenty of SCP's on their documents, but the most famous example is SCP-173, it describes as a sculpture figure with a weird creepy face that can't move, unless it does from a blinking eyes. If the sculpture is next to a victim, it will break their neck.

If you're curious about this fictional organisation, it actually has its own website "SCP-Wiki.Net" and it was started in July 19th, 2008, it was two years before the birth of Slenderman.

I highly recommend to go check this site and it has some interesting documents about these entities and... Maybe il make my Top list with these SCPs.

And thats what SCP Foundation is my number 1 favorite of Creepypasta stories.

Well, this ends of my Halloween special countdown.

So, you have your honorable mention, opinion or any suggestions, let me know at the comments bellow.

So thanks for reading, im Anthony, signing out and Happy Halloween.